Saturday, April 12, 2014

Saturday Spankings





Another Saturday, another Saturday Spankings.  Today I'm featuring a snippet from my first published book.  Lonesome Oak Ranch is a collection of three stories, the second  is titled A Vacation to Remember. It is the story of Susan and Jeremy Blake and their journey through a ghost town that spurs memories that bring their past into their present.


No, I don't want to do it. Now leave it alone."

  Susan couldn't do that. She just kept pushing.

  "If you want to do it you go right ahead but leave me out of it."

  "But ..." she never finished her sentence. Jeremy grabbed her and took her over his knee.

 "I have had enough Susan. I told you to leave it alone and you won't. Since you won't listen to my words, maybe this will to keep you quiet for a while."

  His hand came down in hard whacks in very quick succession. Susan didn't even have time to process the pain when the next spank fell.

  "You are being very unreasonable!" she managed to get out. "Stop it now."

  "You are the one that is being unreasonable. I will stop when I think you have learned your lesson. I surely am not going to stop while you are screaming at me like some banshee," he told her.


This may be more than eight sentences but it is eight lines, does that count?  If not, oh well, spank me.  This book and my other books can be purchased by clicking on any of the titles below. They can also be purchased through Amazon.com

Lonesome Oak Ranch

Living the Dream
Love Is Where You Find It
Taming Maria

Be sure and stop by these other sites to read some exciting snippets.
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26 comments:

  1. 8 lines counts in my book!! Sounds like a great story!!

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  2. I want to know what she wouldn't leave! Great snip.

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  3. 8 or near enough. And no good comes of screaming lkike a Banshee. Unless ypou are a Banshee I suppose...

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    1. No Banshee's get very aggravating after a while, you can't even hear yourself think.

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  4. I think I am going to re-read this one! Loved the 8 lines ms Sunny, I don't always follow the exact rules either!

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  5. Oh I love that one line. Not going to stop while she's screaming like a banshee. This sounds delicious.

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    1. Thanks, how much do you want to bet she stopped screaming, well eventually. :)

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  6. Wait, can we get spanked if we go over? Interesting. This is a great book and holds special interest for you. But you know that.

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    1. It hasn't worked for me, so I write it into a story.

      Yes, I do.

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  7. Yes, I want to know what it is she keeps going on about. And I think 8 lines is a appropriate substitute for 8 sentences.

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  8. I like the screaming at him like a banshee... :) Very cute and I forgive you for going over the 8. But I do hope you get spanked anyway... :D

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  9. yum! I love him just taking her over his knee

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    1. It is a lovely visual and I'm always wishing it was me.

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  10. Who wants to follows rules. Loved the book.

    Love,
    Ronnie
    xx

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    1. Thanks Ronnie for the compliment. I don't like following rules, to me they were meant to be broken. :)

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  11. Uh oh, someone's in trouble. We like that. Give her all you've got, Jeremy ;)

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    1. Yes, we do like it. It makes for an interesting story.

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  12. "Maybe this will keep you quiet. . ." Actions can be louder than words! ;)

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    1. My mother always used to tell me that, you would like I learned. :)

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  13. Where is the fun in following thr rules all the time?:) great snippet. Screaming surely won't make him stop ... Neither will smart arse comments in my experience :)

    Hugs
    Roz

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  14. Yeah, those smart arse comments are never good and I am a very slow learner, actually when it comes to this, I don't learn period.

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